In an engaging review of the translation of Mikhail Shiskin's novel, Maidenhair, by Marian Schwartz, James Meek (2012) asserts that most writers seek to provide readers with (at least) a double sense of time: the time of the story, its retrospective, chronological narrative structure, or fabula; and the time of the plot, the telling or being told, its narrative unfolding, or syuzhet, to employ a contrast derived from Russian formalism.
Briefly, the story is the sequence of events that the narrative describes; the plot is the sequence in which events are presented in a specific reading, hearing or watching.
To this duality, Bernstein (2009), in a discussion of hypertext narrative, adds a third term: presentation. In contrast to presentation, both story and plot are relatively abstract. Presentation is what we actually see and hear; story and plot are what we infer, as viewers and auditors, or what we plan and articulate, as creators. For Bernstein, while hypertext may introduce variation in presentation and story, it is most useful in changing or adapting plot.
Meek uses the phrase 'narrative drive' to describe the articulation of events following one another in chronological order with events having consequences that lead to other events, the difference between 'this event comes after that event', sequential, and 'this event depends upon that event', contingent. He suggests that the work of Mikhail Shishkin exhibits neither sequentiality nor contingency.
Shishkin, then, might be said to confound, to refuse the order of sequence and contingency. Nothing follows, one might suggest.
Yet in describing Shishkin's 'novel', Maidenhair, Meek cannot avoid the notions of order, movement and passage. In characterising Shishkin's work as a "prose portfolio", he argues that it is like, "an exhibition you walk through in a particular order because that's the way the pages are put together, as you might walk clockwise round a gallery".
In other words, Shishkin's work exhibits sequential order. It is consecutive.
While refusing order is impossible in printed, published formats or presentations, with B. S. Johnson taking the most extreme position in this regard with publication of The Unfortunates, might it be more achievable in hypertextual formats, where the order may be confounded through simple confusion or inattention?
With hypertext, rather than 'nothing follows', it might be argued that 'everything follows', an abundance of sequences which undermine contingency, and hence, 'narrative drive'. [For a further discussion of this point, see the post Anime].
The issue becomes, then, that of 'drive' or 'movement' or 'passage'. According to Meek, "Shishkin presents a universe in which each life is an implicit plea for its own value, measured in the fine grain of experienced detail."
The difficulty here is in understanding "the identity of all present moments throughout the whole of time", as Schopenhauer, cited by Meek, has it. This would indeed both stop the passage of temporalities, whether the chronology of story or of contingency of plot, and prevent narrative drive ever from arising.
Yet, again, in Shishkin, there is an inability to create that identity other than through a sequence of different moments, "a stream of small memories, one after the other".
One question might be: Why seek to deny contingency or sequence? Do not all such endeavours become games or practices that play with contingency and sequence for particular effects?
Why not face up to the supplement at the origin ([of language] and of narration, it might be added) (Derrida, 1976: 270), the additive substitution that articulates the non-identity at the heart of identification, and puts the sequence in presence, and opens up, while always putting question, the 'narrative drive' or, rather, the narrative passage?
References
Bernstein, M., 2009. On hypertext narrative. Proceedings of the 20th ACM conference on Hypertext and hypermedia - HT ’09. Available at: http://portal.acm.org/citation.cfm?doid=1557914.1557920. Accessed on 23 September 2010.
Derrida, J., 1976. Of grammatology, Baltimore, Maryland: Johns Hopkins University Press.
Meek, J. (2012). Cloud-brains. London Review of Books, 34 (22), pp.31-32.
